On the contrary!
In contrast to the previous reviewer, I think your mix is too complete. If this was an 8bit track, it'd be fucking amazing! Sometimes, an embracement of limitation is just exactly what a song needs, and I think this piece an example of that. Its composition is so emaculate and intricate that it begs to be a chip tune in my ears, except for the rev-boom at 0:20. That was nicely executed, perfectly fit, and it gives a good dynamic to the piece in it's current state. If it were me though, this would totally be a chiptune. Nice work! :thumbsup: