oi, easy on the compreZz0r
Aside from being way too compressed, the song is very interesting. I like the intricacy of your melody's and the way things blend together, you've got the potential to make some great music, but you need to learn more about mixing..or let someone else do it, heh. Also, I'm missing the breakbeat part of the song. Cool easy going trancy/ambient feel though, i dig it.
As a tip, listen to your final mix on an average sound system, nothing too terribly impressive, like some cheap speakers in a car or a $40 set of 2.1 computer speakers. That'll give you an idea of how the average joe is perceiving your music, rather than what it sounds like rendered at maximum bit rate with some badass headphones or studio monitors.